Lady of Fire

this was so good. you really create a great mental picture and you can really understand Tera's emotions and fears. i cant wait for the next chapter.

thank you. I'm always bad with punctuation, but your kind words make me fell like i have accomplished something.

this is really good. a few unnatural sentences but besides that, it really drew me in. i can't wait to read more.

I wrote this about a year ago and still don't know how i came up with it. Hope you like it. ^-^ ________________________________________________________________________ The whistle of the wind The son

this is really good. you can feel the emotion threw your writing. it blew me away.

this was really good. i don't think you should change it. but, quick question, how could you be sitting then walking?