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Lady of Fire

  • Romantic Novels Re: Unloved- Chapter 2 Dilemma (edited)

    this was so good. you really create a great mental picture and you can really understand Tera's emotions and fears. i cant wait for the next chapter.

    Jun 2, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Whistle of the Wind, Song of the Rain

    thank you. I'm always bad with punctuation, but your kind words make me fell like i have accomplished something.

    Apr 11, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Unloved- Prologue (edited)

    this is really good. a few unnatural sentences but besides that, it really drew me in. i can't wait to read more.

    Apr 11, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Whistle of the Wind, Song of the Rain

    I wrote this about a year ago and still don't know how i came up with it. Hope you like it. ^-^ ________________________________________________________________________ The whistle of the wind The son

    Apr 11, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Kiss

    this is really good. you can feel the emotion threw your writing. it blew me away.

    Apr 10, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alone

    this was really good. i don't think you should change it. but, quick question, how could you be sitting then walking?

    Apr 10, 2008


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle